Nice
Lets get down to business shall we?
-Pro's-
- I like the almost Ska strumming you have for the first guitar, nice and clean as well, adds a lot to the musics overall ambiance.
- The drums just being a snare roll fill fit the music nicely in most parts.
- The third guitar (comes in at 1:23) had a very nice melody to it.
- I like the subtleties in some of the instruments.
- The timing in this song is near perfect, I can't hear any problems. I know when I mix music with real bass and Guitar it's bloody hard to get all of the instruments to mix perfectly.
- Its overall mixing was good, no low bass clipping, no high irritating frequencies.
- Its an overall relaxing song, I quite like the mood it sets.
-Cons-
- Some bars go for a bit too long.
- The drums could be a little louder.
- The bass line also could be a more "spicy" and also doesn't really sound like a bass, if its a synth, I don't think it works as well as a bass guitar could.
- The distorted guitar, I think, should have a little less distortion on it.
Those are all of the pro's and con's I can see with your song man, and its obvious that the pro's far out weigh the con's.
Well done on a very nice track.
Also, to Chronamut, I think the "peaks" in his strumming are meant to be there.
Again, well done
Anima